tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post8169268929711195499..comments2023-06-13T10:41:59.296+02:00Comments on Thoughts from a riddled mind.: Poem #6 - "Success"M.Zhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-9036525471412427122014-03-01T11:36:15.047+01:002014-03-01T11:36:15.047+01:00Thank you!Thank you!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-24838623572377591232014-03-01T10:06:50.160+01:002014-03-01T10:06:50.160+01:00Well said MZ. Very direct and yet very cool. You&#...Well said MZ. Very direct and yet very cool. You've excellently covered all players in their yearnings to be successful. Great word craft!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-51324017317470302832014-02-28T23:25:50.901+01:002014-02-28T23:25:50.901+01:00An endless cycle for some i guess...Not good thoug...An endless cycle for some i guess...Not good though!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-89476135861266144112014-02-28T23:21:06.546+01:002014-02-28T23:21:06.546+01:00the image of everyone passing the water hole is po...the image of everyone passing the water hole is powerful.... I wonder why we can never have enough....ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2014/02/28/untied-pu/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-38425517379985663362014-02-28T00:50:51.922+01:002014-02-28T00:50:51.922+01:00I completely agree with you! And thank you, I real...I completely agree with you! And thank you, I really like when I receive kind words for my work! :)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-7859985386849320652014-02-27T15:44:00.940+01:002014-02-27T15:44:00.940+01:00I think we should never judge our success through ...I think we should never judge our success through other's eyes..that is the thing which gives us the trauma, the fear of being criticized ! <br />"Money is a helpless animal<br />hunted by<br />the modern carnivores."<br /><br />Great lines !! how wonderfully you've expressed the greed and lust for money..Maniparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16109166826609932168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-53222697364475995392014-02-27T11:42:59.672+01:002014-02-27T11:42:59.672+01:00Thanks for your thoughtful words!Thanks for your thoughtful words!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-36686833656680982972014-02-27T11:42:39.624+01:002014-02-27T11:42:39.624+01:00Nice to meet you too! I spent a lot of time crafti...Nice to meet you too! I spent a lot of time crafting that sentence into something meaningful, so I'm glad you liked it!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-90417851355753890932014-02-27T09:39:06.962+01:002014-02-27T09:39:06.962+01:00'Success is what drives us'...I believe in...'Success is what drives us'...I believe in this...you've painted in myriad shades.....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-23567433008281524012014-02-27T03:31:15.898+01:002014-02-27T03:31:15.898+01:00Lots of food for thought here ~ I specially like ...Lots of food for thought here ~ I specially like this part:<br /><br />Success is what it is<br />a never-ending fear of failure molding us into brutish creatures.<br /><br />Nice to meet you ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-17229120694436820592014-02-27T00:17:23.675+01:002014-02-27T00:17:23.675+01:00Fear is what drives most of us to do something, no...Fear is what drives most of us to do something, not a positive thing though unfortunately. But thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-67871055807477315272014-02-26T23:56:14.542+01:002014-02-26T23:56:14.542+01:00Many thanks for your kind words! I like how you co...Many thanks for your kind words! I like how you compare it to a painting! If I had the skills to paint (which I don't unfortunately) it would be interesting to illustrate some of my poetry to accompany it on this site!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-2517420606950950132014-02-26T23:51:00.653+01:002014-02-26T23:51:00.653+01:00a straight up look at success, M.Z.
If this poem w...a straight up look at success, M.Z.<br />If this poem were a painting it would be primary colors and harsh lines.<br />Nicely doneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-78063380482230654982014-02-26T23:45:18.670+01:002014-02-26T23:45:18.670+01:00M.Z.,
Your poem made me think of success in other...M.Z.,<br /><br />Your poem made me think of success in other ways, aside from my own poem. A superb final line, really draws all else together and supports this human expression and why we keep going..Fear of failing.<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-39556898910255241782014-02-26T22:52:57.899+01:002014-02-26T22:52:57.899+01:00I'm pleased that you liked it :)I'm pleased that you liked it :)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-31025928679283414362014-02-26T22:42:25.192+01:002014-02-26T22:42:25.192+01:00loved the theme of this.. success is what ever you...loved the theme of this.. success is what ever your definition is...and can only be measured by you...revelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-10297521421858406672014-02-26T22:37:48.621+01:002014-02-26T22:37:48.621+01:00Nice! Er ret nyt til blogging, så lige nu kan jeg ...Nice! Er ret nyt til blogging, så lige nu kan jeg se at der ligger en hel verden foran mig til at udforske! Dejligt at der er andre der bor lidt tættere på end alle de amerikanske bloggere man ser rundt omkring hehe!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-55930841215195102662014-02-26T22:30:37.432+01:002014-02-26T22:30:37.432+01:00Så en norrman och en dansk on en svensk.. mycket b...Så en norrman och en dansk on en svensk.. mycket bra.. och Tina som är född i Sverige..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-77925633179515428132014-02-26T22:21:14.579+01:002014-02-26T22:21:14.579+01:00Success breeds more and more success until it ulti...Success breeds more and more success until it ultimately leads to the destruction of the human being in search for it.<br /><br />And yep! I'm from Denmark! Godt at se nogle skandinaviske digtere her i blogging verdenen ;)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-318651171717373382014-02-26T22:08:20.145+01:002014-02-26T22:08:20.145+01:00Success as measured in the eye of other is a letha...Success as measured in the eye of other is a lethal path.. either it leads to failure or even worse -- to success --- feeding the urge for more success --- and a longer drop in the end... (btw.. do I spot a fellow Scandinavian here).brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-64778050100711630932014-02-26T22:01:38.611+01:002014-02-26T22:01:38.611+01:00Thanks! Success is not what most people draw it to...Thanks! Success is not what most people draw it to be, it has it's bad sides too, which are not shown very often :)M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-658090817592026422014-02-26T21:53:29.529+01:002014-02-26T21:53:29.529+01:00MZ, you really have nailed many kinds of success i...MZ, you really have nailed many kinds of success in this world....and not all of them giving a positive picture of success! Lots of wisdom here!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-90891552844913495342014-02-26T21:41:30.635+01:002014-02-26T21:41:30.635+01:00Money is a fake trading tool used to buy fake plea...Money is a fake trading tool used to buy fake pleasures, if only we all could go back to trade whatever we have for services and items!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-48920496851851872042014-02-26T21:26:04.247+01:002014-02-26T21:26:04.247+01:00"Money is a helpless animal
hunted by
the mod..."Money is a helpless animal<br />hunted by<br />the modern carnivores."<br /><br />so much truth in that alone... $$$ - people will do the most f'd up shit for it... guess that's why they call it "the root of all evil" Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-474277830485683451.post-21201136363856818502014-02-26T19:26:59.716+01:002014-02-26T19:26:59.716+01:00It sure can be! Great to see you again as well, i ...It sure can be! Great to see you again as well, i really enjoy reading your work!M.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821396259847165888noreply@blogger.com