Poem #6 - "Success"

QUESTION OF THE DAY:
As the feedback on the former poem was big, here is a new question! Thanks a lot for the many comments about my poem #5, i really appreciate it! You guys really make this site alive, and motivates me to keep on writing! 

What do you see as success?

This poem was written TODAY as a part of the midweek motif on the site http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/. Enjoy, I haven't used much time to edit it, but I think I did a great job anyways!

//EDIT! Also posted on http://dversepoets.com/ for their monthly open link night!

"Success"

We listen to the marching rhythm of the work force

traveling it's way to the waterhole.

They greet, drink and feed of each others suits and ties.

Appearance is a sign of the content-less poets.

Listen to the writing of the lone accountant prowling on its prey.

Money is a helpless animal

hunted by

the modern carnivores.

We're haunted by a constant stabbing in the back,

social creatures you might say.

Do well 

Do good 

Do better 

Do best

Success is what we make it

birds learning to fly

Success is what makes us

forming armies of student loans and self-abuse.

Success is what drives us

blows cool air in our face at much needed times

Success is what it is

a never-ending fear of failure molding us into brutish creatures.

Poem #2 - "Confusion at dawn"

QUESTION OF THE DAY:

As there were no answers on the former post, here's the same one again:

Do you write poetry yourself? If yes, who are you inspired by?

This was written almost the same time as poem #1, and is about feelings that can invade a mind at certain times. This is one of my more "weird" poems, that might not make any sense to the reader, but keep in mind, this was around the time i was greatly inspired by James Douglas Morrison. Enjoy, leave feedback, and feel free to share.

"Confusion at dawn" 

I know you spoke to me.
   When?
At dawn.
  Where?
Inside my liver.

Confess your sin!
Cast a spell on your inner voice!
Make it last into Ragnarok!

Out of paper.
Mindless robot.
Come to me and
Beg
For
Your Pre-
Cious

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